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unforth ([personal profile] unforth) wrote2008-01-02 11:40 pm

A Second Novel

It's funny. As I was plowing through the Hogwarts story and the Changeling stuff, I kept saying that it wasn't like real writing, that the reason my daily word counts were so high was because it was SO much easier than actual writing, and people seemed to kind of doubt that.

Two days in to my second original actual novel, and I feel very vindicated. Starting on an actual page one, with only a vague sense of where things are going? Much harder. Infinitely harder, then writing up events I half remember, stories for which know the end. I don't know how many words I've written, either, because I've been really slaving over my notes, unlike last time. I'm determined not to have the muddle I had in my first novel. ;)

(here's my plot: "over the course of a very long war, both countries have used mercenaries to fight for them so much that this has become a serious problem. Mercenaries are bad." My device: "relate how mercenaries are bad and what will be done about them in a series of entwining stories where elements and characters from earlier stories grow involved in later stories." That's everything I know.)

[identity profile] unforth.livejournal.com 2008-01-03 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, perhaps I should have noted that this story device was what I WANTED to do with my first book, and failed miserably. ;) The first one had a scary high number of protagnists, a couple of antagonists, and scads secondary characters - it was political, after all.

That's a really neat approach to plotting - thanks for sharing. :)

I'm certainly plotting more than in the last round; before I write every day this time I'm composing dossiers on new characters I'm introducing. The biggest problem I felt I had in the first story was that all of the characters ended up seeming the same to me, and so in an effort to keep them distinct, I'm putting thought in to their backgrounds. This is a very character-driven story, because of the more than one main character thing. you're not the only person to tell me they don't like that kind of thing, but I just thought I'd give it a try. And I definitely do want to.

But with two people telling me to outline, perhaps I should give it a try. ;)

Thanks for the advice!